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英语:Wonderland修改版(18.4.19)  

2018-04-19 23:13:29|  分类: 英语征程 |  标签: |举报 |字号 订阅

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    (亮爸注:这篇作文是在上次《Wonderland(18.3.28)》基础上修改的,调整了一些语序,修改了个别修饰词,做了适量删减。虽然还有一些语法错误,但有了一些进步,估计有Alan老师很大的功劳。我也赞成老师这种作业方式,有时炒冷饭也蛮香的。不多说了,明早做炒饭。)

    How did I come to this wonderland? Well, you’re not going to believe this, because it’s so incredible. I borrow (maybe use ‘take’ is more credible because I’m not going to give it back) the wings from duck and flew here. I already told you that you’ll not trust your ear if you standing in front of me. You can surely believe what you see — I’m laying on the hot bench, feeling sick and tired.

    (我是如何来到这片奇境的?噢,你会难以置信,事实便是如此。我从鸭子那里借来(或者用‘拿’形容更合适,因为我打算有借无还)翅膀,飞到此处。我已经说过,哪怕你站在我面前,都会怀疑自己的眼睛。事实上你应该相信自己的眼睛,可以看到我累瘫在长凳上,精疲力竭。)

    Trees, plants growing up from the ground, there are too many of them, even shaded myvision. Lots of monkeys jump from tree to tree, projecting a huge shadow on the ground. Clear waterfall—it’s a good news for me because it means I have things to drink. Birds flew their giant wings at the top of trees. Small orange crabs are crawling with turtles. Palm trees are growing candies, and even the mapping paper is map on it, reflecting the colorful light in the sunlight. It can move,it can talk. But I don’t feel scary, because they are realy kind and fridenly. They even gave me some candy (don’t ask me how can they make candies). It’s creepy. All plants here can talk. But they are harmless. I’ll not be homeless.

    (这片土地上枝繁叶茂,简直可以说遮天蔽日。猴子在树林中跳跃,在地面投下巨大的阴影。瀑布清澈可见,对我来说可是好消息,总算有水喝了。巨鸟扇动着翅膀,从树顶掠过。橙色的小螃蟹和乌龟一起爬行。棕榈树居然结出了糖果,还有地图纸,在阳光照射下熠熠发光。它们能动,还会说话,不过我并不害怕,因为它们和善可亲,甚至给了我一些糖果吃(别问我这些糖果是怎么结出来的)。有点令人害怕,这里的植物都会说话。好在它们都是无害的。我不至于无处可呆。)

    This house is covered by trees. It is old butit isn’t scary. Kitchen, bedroom, living room…it just likes the house Ilived before. OH, cookies! That’s great! Well, a tree that grows sandwitches and lemon tea told me there is a house underground. So I went into that house and there is nothing there. Empty, quiet and scary. I took my cellphone – and itdid not work. So thatis it. I’m out of the house!!

    (这座房子被树丛包围着,尽管有些陈旧,却不吓人。厨房、卧室、客厅……和我曾经住过的房子一模一样。噢,糖果,太棒了!一株长出三明治和柠檬茶的树告诉我,这房子里还有间地下室。我进了房子,但什么也没发现。那里空空如也,一片寂静,令人害怕,我拿出手机,但没有信号。就这样吧,我离开了房子。)

    This land is small and beautiful, and small.I walked around. It took me one afternoon. Dolphins jump out of pool in the middle of this land. Shells are beautiful like the color of the sea.

    (这片土地虽然不大,却很美丽。是的,不大。我花了一下午逛了个遍。这块地的中央有个池子,海豚在其中欢快地翻腾,美丽的贝壳就像海水一般蓝。)

    It’s a good land, wonderland.

    (这真是一片美丽的土地,一处奇境。)

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